#WRITING 'Computers are used widely in most countries now, | IELTS Nerds
#WRITING "Computers are used widely in most countries now, and they are a sign of progress, and we must ensure everyone has access to them." Using two "and" in one sentence is ineffective. Incorrect formula = SV and SV and SV. X
Corrected "Computers are used widely in most countries now, and they are a sign of progress. So, we must ensure everyone has access to them".
