2021-06-03 20:21:53
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To succeed in a business, one needs to know maths.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Running an effective business requires some calculations which made some people believe that an entrepreneur needs mathematical skills in order to operate a successful business. Notwithstanding, this discourse delves into both point of views, and subsequently will put forward reasons why I disagree with the view.
Calculation is essential in day to day activities of every establishment, and the sole purpose why most people feel that an extensive knowledge in mathematics is invaluable for any business to excel. For instance, estimating work profit and loss, quantity of goods or services required, and fixed and recurrent expenditures involves daily computation by a skilled personnel. Therefore, if the manager or owner of an investment have little or zero understanding of mathematics, there is a high possibility that the trade might collapse from mismanagement.
On the other hand, does it mean that there is a significant chance that most striving businesses might fail due to owner's incompetence in maths? Personally, I think that mathematics is undoubtedly an inconsequential skill for most determined business persons. By this I mean that some individuals, who are specialized in this vocation such as mathematicians, could be graciously employed to handle the everyday calculations needed in the job. Moreover, there are other crucial properties that most entrepreneur require to maintain a profitable merchandise. For instance, studies have shown that managerial and innovative talents are definitely substantial in building up a great business.
In conclusion, having explored both stand points, I reiterate that maths is immensely vital in growth of a business, but this skill can easily be filled by a professional. Beside, possessing other skills are equally indispensable for most excellent businessmen or women.
#Assessment by John Bosco
Running an effective business "requires" some calculations which "made" [makes] some people "believe" that an entrepreneur "needs" mathematical skills...
[See verb-tense consistency rule!! Also not that "Running an effective business..." here is taken to be a singular subject which must equally agree with its singular (verb) object (i.e. "requires", "makes".]
...most entrepreneur [entrepreneurs]
[See Quantifiers.]
...in growth of a business [in "the" growth of a business or in growing a business
See Articles and Determiners.]
TA = 7.0
CC = 6.5
LR = 6.5
GRA = 6.5
BS = 6.5
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