Here is my overview paragraph for the above task 1: Overall, | IELTS Proficiency
Here is my overview paragraph for the above task 1:
Overall, the largest proportion of people donating money was the middle aged in both years, while the young adults were the least generous of all. It is also clear that those aged up to 50 were more generous at first; however, fewer older people would give money to charity. These figures were reversed in 2010.
