FEEDBACK I GOT!!! Overall: The good news is your grammar and v | Sirojiddin Malikov | IELTS EVEREST

FEEDBACK I GOT!!!
Overall: The good news is your grammar and vocab are excellent. It’s a real relief as we can concentrate on structure and ideas going forward. They are easily both 8 in my opinion. I do think that body 1 could have had a better CC score if you had constructed it like you did body 2. Honestly, I think this would get an 8, but there is a chance that CC could be 7 because of the body 1 issue I’m talking about. Aside from that, the only changes I would make are in the corrections above. Well done.

Score: TR 8, CC 7+, LR 8, GR 8 = 7.5 (could be higher)

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