Read these two sample answers and let me know which one you li | IELTS ZONE 9.0

Read these two sample answers and let me know which one you like better. One was prepared by Tahasoni (an experienced IELTS instructor from Iran) and the other by me. I wrote it under 18 minutes in class, so expect to see some inaccuracies here and there.
P.S. those who know the answer for sure, don't spoil the fun for others :)