[General] I'm 16 and I penned down my first poem. Please give | ©Poetic Disorder

[General] I'm 16 and I penned down my first poem. Please give your feedback.
Luck is a monster that dances everyday, Flatter her and she quickly decays. Think about her and she'll never come your way, But ignore her and forever she'll stay. Her dance is captivative and naughty are her ways, Work hard in life and you'll mock her away. For hard work is fatal but luck never dies And when you've succeeded, She'll finally smile. But in the corner of your life you'll find her having a little laugh, For your hard work is credited to just a matter of chance, And men remark, "he succeeded because luck had her dance"

Submitted March 08, 2018 at 01:15PM by philogagging
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