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To be honest, I owe a lot to some people , who played a part in my life to become a person I am today, however, I can probabaly single out one of them as the most influential one. It was a spacemen and , you know, I don't think of this person as an old,as he is still young at heart, but I suppose he is because he will be 80 next year. Unfourtunetly, he lives in residental nursing home , which makes me so sad , but he had a full and interesting life and done many brave things .When it comes to his personality ,I can surely say that he is like a walking encyclopedia, on the grounds that he is very educated with many academic and cultural interests. Well , if I am not mistaken , it was 3 years ago , when I studyed at school, so we waited for the visit of spacemen , who was the relative of my teacher and she invited him as my classmates and I were really interested in the stories , which she told us about him . It was the most exciting conversation I have ever had since it has transformed the way of my thinking. The conclusive premise is that , spacemen didn't capitalize on his life stories,anyway he told all difficulties that he has undergone , as we have understod after , his main aim was to motivate us to do better and he certainly achieved it . During our conversation, everyone was so careful to his words that we lost the track of time. He could impart his valuable pieces of advice and vital inspiration , that still help me stay motivated and make efforts for reaching my goals . Whenever I put my hands down, his words are coming to my mind and all negative feelings are superseded by them . Not only did he motivate us not to give up , but also he told that we should be independent and self-confedent if we want to try our best in the future. As for his role in my life , the worthness of his words is ever-increasing day by day and they give me directions now. I hope to meet him in the near future with view to enjoying a phenomenal conversation again , which might bring new beginnings in my life as it did 3 years ago

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