Get Mystery Box with random crypto!

Diyorbek's IELTS | 9.0

Logo of telegram channel diyorbeksielts — Diyorbek's IELTS | 9.0 D
Logo of telegram channel diyorbeksielts — Diyorbek's IELTS | 9.0
Channel address: @diyorbeksielts
Categories: Languages
Language: English
Subscribers: 76.30K
Description from channel

📩 @diyorbeksielts_admin
📞 77 030 88 28
📍 Novza metro, Bunyodkor Str, 1, behind Ziraat Bank

Ratings & Reviews

2.00

2 reviews

Reviews can be left only by registered users. All reviews are moderated by admins.

5 stars

0

4 stars

0

3 stars

1

2 stars

0

1 stars

1


The latest Messages 8

2024-04-11 11:07:47 April 7 mock test takers, please come to take your speaking tests or have it online.

@diyorbeksielts_admin
20.1K viewsDiyorbek, edited  08:07
Open / Comment
2024-04-09 21:08:01
16.0K viewsDiyorbek, 18:08
Open / Comment
2024-04-09 17:14:38
NEW IELTS AND PRE-IELTS GROUPS

You want to boost your English and score 7+ before the new academic year? Then, join our upcoming Pre-IELTS and IELTS courses.

Teacher: Ulug'bek Umidjonov (W8.5, S9)

Diyorbek's IELTS LC (near Novza metro)

Write to @diyorbeksielts_admin to register!
17.6K viewsDiyorbek, 14:14
Open / Comment
2024-04-09 16:03:25 TEXT: And therein lies the terror for big companies : that innovation seems to work best outside them. Many of the large established companies have been struggling to come up with new products recently.' In the management of creativity ,size is your enemy…
16.6K viewsDiyorbek, 13:03
Open / Comment
2024-04-09 08:01:34 TEXT:

And therein lies the terror for big companies : that innovation seems to work best outside them. Many of the large established companies have been struggling to come up with new products recently.' In the management of creativity ,size is your enemy,’ argues Peter Chemin ,who runs Fox TV and film empire for News Corporation. "One person managing 20 movies is never going to be as involved as one doing five movies .'He has thus tried to break down the studio into smaller units ,even at the risk of incurring higher costs.

QUESTION:


Peter Chemin is an example of someone who has realized that

A large companies are less innovative than small ones.
B other businesses are more innovative than the film business,
C his employees need more experience of innovation.
D he is the best person to encourage innovation.

#reading
19.7K viewsDiyorbek, 05:01
Open / Comment
2024-04-08 20:38:39 People say that cars should be banned from the centres of large cities.
Do you agree or disagree? (IELTS General Training Topic)


Cars have spread across the world in plague proportions, causing congestion and pollution, especially in the centres of large metropolises. Suggestions that vehicles should be restricted from city centres certainly have their merits, though there are some disadvantages to be considered as well.

Making sure cars stay away from city centres is generally a good idea, particularly if the central city area is relatively small, like Melbourne. In this case, it would be easy for drivers to leave their vehicles on the fringes of central areas and take public transport or walk the rest of the way to their destination. Gridlock would be eased considerably and many commuters would be encouraged to seek transport alternatives, like bicycles. The city centre would become a calm, people-friendly oasis.

On the other hand, if the cities being considered for car bans have large built-up centres, like Tokyo, this would place additional stress on public transport networks, and disadvantage the elderly and disabled, who would otherwise enjoy maintaining their independence. Supplementary parking for the cars left at the fringes would also be required, as well as new pedestrian infrastructure. Finally, after all these changes, congestion would likely remain outside the city centres anyway.

In conclusion, depending on individual circumstances, it is mostly easy to agree with the idea of banning cars from big city centres. However, there are some disadvantages which need to be kept in mind. Whichever solution is chosen, the issue of congestion caused by cars is unlikely to disappear anytime soon. (250 words)

#examiner_writes
20.8K viewsDiyorbek, edited  17:38
Open / Comment
2024-04-07 10:16:06
ChatGPT gave this essay a 7.0-8.0. It is actually a band 10 essay.

Stop using LLMs for essay evaluation. Instead, use them to edit your essays and improve them.

They are too bad at Task 1. For Task Achievement of Task 1, you need a really good teacher
20.4K viewsDiyorbek, edited  07:16
Open / Comment
2024-04-07 10:15:17
ChatGPT evaluating an examiner-written response provided at the back of Cambridge IELTS 9
18.4K viewsDiyorbek, 07:15
Open / Comment
2024-04-07 09:54:32 You don't have to write both sides to get a 9.0 for Task Response. With 4 of my exams out of 6 with IDP in 2022-2023, Task Response was 9.0, and they were one-sided essays.
17.7K viewsDiyorbek, edited  06:54
Open / Comment
2024-04-07 09:14:00 Achieving sporting success on a global level raises the stature of a country. To that end, some nations go so far as to construct amenities exclusively reserved for elite athletes rather than for the general public. I believe that this is a negative trend for two reasons.

Firstly, the construction of sports complexes intended solely for the use of top sportspeople is unfair. These amenities are usually built with significant public funds, and restricting access to only a select group rather than the majority of society represents an unjust allocation of taxpayer money. This may engender feelings of resentment and bitterness among the public, leading to a less cohesive society. Consequently, it can be inferred that this practice puts individuals at the grassroots level at a disadvantage, favoring only those at the opposite end of the spectrum in terms of sporting abilities.

This practice also leads to a decline in public health. With limited access to such facilities, people will have fewer opportunities for exercise, potentially resulting in long-term health issues such as obesity and diabetes. As the prevalence of such health problems increases, it strains the healthcare system, escalating the country's healthcare costs. This demonstrates that such a practice is short-sighted, leading to numerous serious economic problems.

In conclusion, the introduction of sports facilities exclusively for top athletes is an unfavorable practice. One reason is that it perpetuates injustice, and the second is that it contributes to the deterioration of public health.

#diyorbek_writes_t2
18.6K viewsDiyorbek, edited  06:14
Open / Comment