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2021-03-29 11:59:50 PROBLEM AND SOLUTION ESSAYS

Typical Question Words
Problem and solution.
Cause and solution.

Example Question

Students are becoming more and more reliant on computers.

What are some of the problems associated with reliance on computers, and what are some of the possible solutions?

Structure

Introduction
Sentence 1- Paraphrase Question
Sentence 2- Outline Sentence

Main Body Paragraph 1
Sentence 1- State Problem
Sentence 2- Explain problem
Sentence 3- Result
Sentence 4- Example

Main Body Paragraph 2
Sentence 1- State Solution
Sentence 2- Explain Solution
Sentence 3- Example

Conclusion
Sentence 1- Summary
Sentence 2- Recommendation or Prediction

Sample Answer

Learners are becoming ever more dependent on technology, such as the Internet and mobile devices. This essay will discuss one of the main problems associated with dependence on computers and suggest a viable solution.

The principal problem with over-reliance on technology, such as tablets and computers, is plagiarism. Students often use search engines to answer a question and simply copy the text from a website, rather than thinking about the question. This practice is not only prohibited in schools and universities but also stunts a student’s intellectual development. For example, many teachers complain that students copy web pages straight from Wikipedia word for word rather than giving a reasoned answer to their questions.

A solution to this worrying problem is asking students to email their answers to teachers and teachers using anti-plagiarism software to detect copying. Moreover, students would be made aware of this practice and this would inspire them to answer questions using their own words, rather than someone else’s. For instance, many universities already use this kind of software to scan course work for plagiarism and it could be extended to include all homework, by learners in both secondary and tertiary education.

In summary, one of the main problems with over-use of technology in education is plagiarism and this can be solved through the use of plagiarism detection software. It is predicted that more and more students’ will email their work to their teacher and this work will be scrutinised for plagiarism.

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2021-03-28 21:49:01 Collocations of the day

Bugungi postimizda 'advantage' (ustunlik) so'zi bilan bog'liq collocationlarni o'rganamiz.

clear/obvious advantage - yaqqol ustunlik
Breastfeeding offers a clear advantage to your baby. (Ko'krakdan emizish farzandingizga yaqqol ustunlik beradi)

key/main/important/unfair advantage - hal qiluvchi/asosiy/muhim/adolatsiz ustunlik
The company has unfair advantage over its competitors (Kompaniya o'zining raqobatchilari ustidan adolatsiz ustunlikka ega)

have/gain/get advantage - ustungligi bo'lmoq/ustunlikni qo'lga kiritmoq/ustunlikni olmoq
He will get considerable advantage from staying in that job. (U bu ishda qolishdan katta ustunlik oladi)

to sb's advantage - kimnidir ustunligiga o'ynamoq
It is to your advantage to delay things as far long as possible. (Ishlarni iloji boricha keyinga kechiktirish sizning ustunligingizga o'ynaydi)

to take (full) advantage of - qulayliklardan to'liq foydalanmoq
We took full advantage of the hotel facilities (Biz mehmonxona qulayliklaridan to'liq foydalandik)
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2021-03-28 16:28:04 Motivation time

Nothing Good will come If you just quit

Keep showing up until You do see the RESULTS

#motivation

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2021-03-28 11:38:40 Useful Phrases - foydali iboralar

Visit relatives - qarindoshlarnikiga tashrif buyurmoq

I visited my relatives yesterday - Men kecha qarindoshlarimnikiga bordim.

Meet up with friends - Do'stlar bilan uchrashmoq

When will you meet up with your friends in Tashkent? - Toshkentdagi do'stlaringiz bilan qachon uchrashasiz?

Tidy up the house - Uyni yig'ishtirmoq

I hate tidying up the house - Uyni yig'ishtirishdan nafratlanaman.

Chat to people online - Odamlar bilan online (Internet) da suhbatlashmoq

I don't like chatting to people online -Odamlar bilan online(Internet)da suhbatlashishni yoqtirmayman.

Go clubbing - tungi klublarga bormoq

Let's go clubbing. - Tungi klublarga boraylik

Go to the exhibitions - Ko'rgazmalarga bormoq

I don't like going to the exhibitions. I feel bored there. - Men ko'rgazmalarga borishni yoqtirmayman. U yerda zerikaman.

Go for a walk - Sayrga chiqmoq

It is useful to go for a walk before sleeping - Yotishdan avval sayrga chiqish foydali.

Do some gardening - Biroz bog' ishlarini qilmoq

I enjoy doing some gardening - Bog' ishlarini qilishdan rohatlanaman.

Do some exercise - Biroz mashq bajarmoq (Badan tarbiya)

Eshmat is 79 years old but he does some exercise every morning. - Eshmat 79 yoshda lekin u har kuni badan tarbiya qiladi.

Have a lie-in - Uzoqroq yotoqda qolmoq (Kech turmoq)

Tomorrow is Sunday so I will have a lie-in. - Ertaga Yakshanba shuning uchun kechroq turaman.

Have people round for dinner - Kechki ovqatga odam taklif qilmoq.

I will have 10 people around for dinner tomorrow - Ertangi kechki ovqatga 10 ta odam taklif qilaman.

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2021-03-27 18:57:22 Writing task 2 in Uzbekistan — 04.03.2021

With growing population in cities, more and more people live in a home with small or no outdoor areas.

Is it a positive or negative development?

These days an increasing number of people are living in an accommodation with small or no outdoor spaces in urban areas. In my opinion, this is a negative development for several reasons.

On the one hand, living in a home with little space may lead to various health problems. Firstly, being constrained in a limited area and have no chance of outdoor activity increase the likelihood of depression. Besides, the lack of air fluency indoors causes respiratory-related disease and undermine the working efficiency. Living in that atmosphere for a long time would only bring bad behaviours such as laziness. Finally, unable to do outdoor activities would cause obesity. If individuals had no space to do some active tasks such as gardening, they would run a sedentary lifestyle, as a result they would become obese.

0n the other hand, it sounds more economical to live in small houses, especially in city centres. House owners can save money by renting an accommodation which is smaller and cheaper. However, there are still some aspects in which spacious outweigh its counterpart. Larger spaces for extended families act as an incentive for their children to develop physically and mentally. It is apparent that by playing outdoor activities in gardens or open spaces people can release stress and children can enhance their immune systems.

In conclusion, while modest accommodations can benefit people in terms of budget, when it comes to healthy lifestyle spacious places will turn out to be the best solution. Therefore, people should base on their individual situations to make the right decision.

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2021-03-27 16:59:10 #Essay
Theme: COMPUTER

Invention of the computer has made many dreams come true even we cannot imagine our lives without computer. Generally computer is a device used for many purposes like information storage, email, messaging, software programming, calculation, data processing and many more. Desktop computer need a CPU, an UPS, a keyboard and a mouse for well functioning however laptop does not need anything to add outside as it is included with all inside. Computer is an electronic device having big memory which can save any data value. We are living in the advanced world of computer in the 21st century.

Earlier the functioning of the old generation computer was very limited but new generation computers are amazing with lots of functioning. Charles Babbage had invented the first mechanical computer which was totally different from the modern day computer. The aim of computer invention was to create a machine which can perform very fast mathematical calculations. During the World War II it was used to locate and estimate the direction and speed of weapons of the enemies. Modern day computers are available with the artificial Intelligence technology to helps us in every sector of life.

New generation computer are being highly advanced means smaller, lighter, speedier and more powerful. Now a day, it is running in almost all walks of life like weather forecasting, guidance of spacecraft, examinations, education, shopping, traffic control, high level programming, automation in banks, railway ticket booking, playing games, medical sector, machinery operations, job opening, business, crime detection etc.

It is the backbone of the Information Technology including with the internet and proved that nothing is impossible today. If there are positive effects of the computer on the life of human being, it also negatively affected the human lives such as rise in the Cyber crime, pornographic websites can be accessed by kids or younger and many more however using some preventive measures we can be safe from its negative effects.

The whole human fraternity is becoming highly dependent on the computer technology; no one can imagine life without computer. As, it has spread its wings so deeply in every area and made people used of it. It is very beneficial for the students of any class. They can use it to prepare their projects, learn poems, read different stories, download notes for exam preparations, collect large information within seconds, learn about painting, drawing, etc. It enhances the professional skills of the students and helps in getting job easily.

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2021-03-27 11:00:01 Savol

3 ta odam ko'prikni yoniga keldi va undan o'tishmoqchi bo'lishdi. 1-inson ko'prikni ko'radi va undan yurib o'tadi, 2-inson ko'prikni ko'radi lekin yurmasdan o'tib ketadi, 3-inson ko'prikni na ko'radi na yuradi lekin u ham ko'prikni narigi tarafiga o'tadi.

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2021-03-27 08:08:12 #Essay
Theme: INTERNET

Internet is a global network which connects millions of computers all over the world. It has become very simple and easy in accomplishing all day to day activities which were very time taking and hard to manage in those days. We cannot think our life without this great invention called internet. As everything has its pros and cons means both positive and negative effects, internet also has affected the human lives in both ways.

Because of the internet, online communication has become very easy and simple. The mode of communication in those days were through letters which was very time taking and hard as one had to travel a long distance. But now, we just need to connect our internet to open some social networking websites and opening Gmail or other accounts (Yahoo, etc) to send messages within seconds.

It has reduced the usage of paper and paper works to a great extent by making everything computerized in the offices (governmental or non-governmental), schools, colleges, educational institutions, training centres, NGOs, universities, shops, business, industries, railway, metro and many more.

Using this internet we can get all the news time to time from all across the world from one place. It is very effective and efficient in gathering huge information whether required for references or activities on any topic within seconds. It has benefited the education, travel and business sectors to a great level. It has made easy access to the online public libraries, textbooks or other resources to find relevant topics.

In the earlier time when people were without internet, they had to waste lots of time for any type of work like standing in the long queues and waiting for their number to get travel ticket. But in the modern time of internet, one can book train online in just few clicks and get travel ticket through printout or get a soft copy in his/her mobile. In the internet world, one does not need to travel a long distance for his/her meeting for business or other purposes.

One can attend his/her meeting online from own office through the use of video calling, conferencing, Skype or using other tools. It helps in getting admission online in his/her desired school, college or universities, hiring highly skilled employees and teachers, business transactions, banking transactions, applying for driving license, money transfer, learning cooking recipes, bill payment, purchasing anything on free delivery and so many activities.

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2021-03-27 07:16:02 #Logic #Riddle #Puzzle

Guess, Who may be left-handed?

So'rovnomada qatnashganlarning atigi 15% i tog'ri javob berishgan

P.s: Topishga xarakat qilib ko'ramiz

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