Structure of the #Essay282 You were given an opinion essa | IELTS Essays Band 9 | IELTS Writing 9.0
Structure of the #Essay282
You were given an opinion essay which means you had to pick a side. So,
· Do you agree that it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing? (or) · Do you disagree that it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing? Once you pick a side, you can start planning your essay and then writing it. Don’t forget to state your opinion on it.
Question Paraphrased - The issue of utilization of the open areas for planting or building more houses has grown to become a debatable issue.
Opinion - In my opinion, I agree that trees and gardens play a vital role in human development. A thesis statement - In the forthcoming paragraph, I shall explain my point of view and give supporting reasons.
Body Paragraph 1: Central idea: Benefits of planting trees over building houses
Supporting points: · Promotes aesthetics of the city · Provides opportunities to engage with other people · Improves quality of life and give more relaxing environment
Body Paragraph 2: Central idea: Benefits of planting trees over building houses
Supporting points: · Improves air and noise quality · Absorbers carbon dioxide and dust
Conclusion: Reiterated that due to mass urbanization, the need for trees and gardens has drastically increased and supported the side taken in introduction.
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