​​ Structure of the #Essay283 You were given an opinion essa | IELTS Essays Band 9 | IELTS Writing 9.0

​​ Structure of the #Essay283

You were given an opinion essay which means you had to pick a side. So,

· Do you agree that it is important for cities and towns to invest heavily in building large outdoor public spaces? (or)

· Do you disagree that it is important for cities and towns to invest heavily in building large outdoor public spaces?

Once you pick a side, you can start planning your essay and then writing it. Don’t forget to state your opinion on it.

Question Paraphrased - As we are progressing towards development and well-built infrastructure, many people claim that it is essential for cities to invest substantially in the creation of large outdoor public spaces.

Opinion - In my opinion, it is true that the authorities should invest in building huge outdoor spaces for the public, as it will promote tourism and public health.
A thesis statement - In the forthcoming paragraph, I shall explain my point of view in detail.

Body Paragraph 1:
Central idea: Benefits of public outdoor areas
Supporting points:
· Important, not only for aesthetic reasons
· Provides opportunities to engage with other people
· Improves quality of life

Body Paragraph 2:
Central idea: Ways outdoor spaces promotes tourism
Supporting points:
· Enhances area’s natural beauty
· Boosts tourism
· Promotes economic development

Conclusion:
Reiterated that investing in outdoor spaces improves the look of a city and helps to promote tourism and supported the side taken in introduction.

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