​​ Structure of the #Essay285 You were given an opinion essa | IELTS Essays Band 9 | IELTS Writing 9.0

​​ Structure of the #Essay285

You were given an opinion essay which means you had to pick a side. So,
· Do you agree with the idea that countries should produce their own goods instead of importing from other countries?
(or)
· Do you disagree with the idea that countries should produce their own goods instead of importing from other countries?

Once you pick a side, you can start planning your essay and then writing it.
Don’t forget to state your opinion on it.

Introduction:
Question Paraphrased - Instead of creating their own food commodities, governments throughout the world are increasingly dependent on food imported from other countries.

Opinion - It is, in my opinion, a dangerous trend that will have a detrimental influence on the agricultural sectors of countries.

A thesis statement - In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain my thoughts in detail.

Body Paragraph 1:
Central idea: Dangerous consequences of importing food

Supporting points:
· Causes a significant drop in local farms’ crop sales
· Deteriorates conditions of local farmers
· Makes country depend on other countries for goods

Body Paragraph 2:
Central idea: Negative effects of food importing

Supporting points:
· Imported goods are not nutritious
· Contains harmful chemicals
· Countries have to spend a huge amount on foreign trade

Conclusion:
Reiterated that imports are not always beneficial and supported the side taken in introduction.

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