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2022-07-29 17:01:53 Hi guys

Are you making an editing mistake?

It's scary how many essays I read that have simple punctuation and capitalisation errors in them. This is genuinely the easiest part of writing, but people often mess this up at least once or twice in their texts. Here are some basic rules to follow and edit for when you've finished writing.

Make sure there is a capital at the start of the sentence

Make sure there are no unnecessary capitals. Check your handwriting. Sometimes people are inconsistent with the size of their letters which creates a capitals mistake.

Put a full stop at the end of every sentence.

Never make the examiner unsure if you have used a comma or a full stop.

Don't use a capital randomly mid-sentence. I often see people write things such as 'In conclusion, People need to...'. You don't capitalise the word 'people' or other words in cases like this. Only capitalise the first word of the sentence and when you are using a name.

In summary, when you practice writing, make sure you never make mistakes with full stops and capital letters.

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2022-07-27 16:21:08 Vocabulary of #Essay223

advent - beginning
digital society - people increasingly online
greater vulnerability - more risk
in terms of - regarding
person information stored online - data about yourself on websites
associated dangers - related risks
significant - massive
outweigh - stronger than
convenient user experience - easy for users
concerned policymakers - worried officials
sensitive information registered - person information on websites
fosters widespread fraud - creates a lot of online crime
majority - most of
some degree of - some level of
data - information
social security numbers - ID numbers
banking details - data about your banking information
naturally - of course
stolen - taken
variety of methods - many ways
phishing emails - emails designed for fraud
hacking - breaking into a website
pose challenges - have risks
law enforcement - police
identity theft - stealing information about you
novel vulnerabilities - new threats
become aware of - now know about
remain - still
permanent fixture - unchanging part
online life - the online world
nonetheless - regardless
rare not common
greater ease of access - easier to use
vast majority of - most of
despite growing cognizance of - regardless of more awareness of
afterthought - not considered much
accept the cookies - allow websites to track you
process - logging in
small savings - little advantage
justifiably meaningful in the aggregate - really means something all added together
online market trading platforms - banks, stock brokerages online
willing - will do it
divulge - give over information
confidential - secret
conducting transactions - making purchases, etc.
tradeoffs - downsides
associated with - related to
on the whole - overall
take steps - begin to
ensure safety - make sure it is secure
being mindful - being aware of
two of the more fundamental human priorities - basic to human nature

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2022-07-24 09:55:05 #Essay223 #Writing #Task2

Positive / Negative

Q: Many people put their personal information online (address, telephone number, and so on) for purposes such as signing up for social networks or online banking.
Is this a positive or negative development?

Answer:

The advent of a digital society has led to greater vulnerability in terms of the person information stored online. In my opinion, these associated dangers are significant but do not outweigh the benefits of a more convenient user experience.

Concerned policymakers often argue that sensitive information registered online fosters widespread fraud. The majority of individuals store some degree of information online whether it is as simple as their address and phone number or more important data such as social security numbers or banking details. Naturally, this information can be stolen. The variety of methods used to steal information, including phishing emails and actual hacking of websites, pose challenges for law enforcement and can lead to crimes such as identity theft. These novel vulnerabilities that all consumers must become aware of are likely to remain a permanent fixture of online life.

Nonetheless, the above instances are rare and storing information online allows for greater ease of access. The best evidence for this is that the vast majority of individuals have decided to store personal information online despite growing cognizance of the risks. For example, it is an afterthought to log in to a website, accept the cookies and store a username, and password. The next time the user logs in, the process only takes seconds and this small savings in terms of effort and time is justifiably meaningful in the aggregate. Moreover, in the case of online market trading platforms and banking websites, consumers are willing to divulge more confidential information to enjoy the conveniences of conducting transactions faster.

In conclusion, the tradeoffs associated with storing important data online do not make it a negative on the whole. Consumers, corporations, and governments must take steps to ensure safety, while being mindful that saving time and effort are two of the more fundamental human priorities.

Total words: 303

Band: 7.5+

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2022-06-22 17:00:32 Grammatical Range and Accuracy

The IELTS examiner will give you a band score for your sentence structures, the tenses you use, your control of grammar and also the number of mistakes you make.

Your score will increase if you:

- use different grammar tenses (conditionals, perfect tenses, passive voice, past, future etc);

- pay attention to word order in your sentences;

- use a range of sentence structures;

- use the correct punctuation (full stops and commas);

- avoid errors in grammar (errors will lower your score – see the table above);

- common grammar errors: articles, plural nouns, uncountable nouns, word order).

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2022-06-20 19:29:02 Vocabulary of #Essay218

remote destinations - places far away
arctic - near Antarctica
contains - has
regarding - as it concerns
preservation - keeping safe
pros - advantages
decisively outweigh - definitely stronger than
cons - disadvantages
on the one hand - on one side
tradeoffs - downsides
untouched - never developed
rapid industrialization - lots of machines, etc.
best efforts - trying their hardest
local governments - the countries themselves
contamination - hurting
various South Pacific islands - small islands in the Pacific ocean
Philippine archipelago - the islands around the Philippines
popular tourist destination - place tourists go
infrastructure - buildings, roads, etc.
similarly - relatedly
cultural environment - the culture, traditions
risk - threat
numerous indigenous cultures - many native peoples
struggle - try hard
maintain their unique heritage - preserve traditions
foreigners - people from other countries
pour into - put a lot into
isolated regions - places far away
on the other hand - however
positives - advantages
research - studies
currently occupied - right now those living there
traditional societies - old cultures
effectively without purpose - essentially no reason
ranging from - including
terrain - land
inhospitable weather - bad weather
offer attractive experiences - make people want to go there
intrepid traveller - adventurous people
researchers - scientists
tangible - real
Galapagos islands - some remote islands
sailed - went by boat
conducted foundational research - important studies
theory of evolution - idea that we evolved from animals
resulted in - caused
discoveries - found out that
archaeology - bones, artifacts
medicine - medical science
marine life - sea animals
environment - nature
injurious - hurts
strong belief - powerful conviction
opening up - allowing people in
unexplored regions - places people have not been
net positive - overall good
regulate - keep in check
mitigate - control
inherent dangers - risks sure to come up

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Advantage / Disadvantage

Q: It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environments, such as the South Pole.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Answer:

The ability to travel to remote destinations such as the arctic and various islands contains advantages related to travel and research as well as disadvantages regarding environmental preservation. In my opinion, the pros decisively outweigh the cons.

On the one hand, the tradeoffs of being able to travel to remote areas are environmental. Most remote locations are untouched by the rapid industrialization of the last two centuries and despite the best efforts of local governments there is likely to be some contamination from tourism. A good example of this would be various South Pacific islands. The Philippine archipelago in particular is a popular tourist destination and this has resulted in increased litter and development of the natural environment for tourist friendly infrastructure such as hotels and restaurants. Similarly, the cultural environment for locals is at risk. Numerous indigenous cultures struggle to maintain their unique heritage as foreigners and modern products pour into previously isolated regions.

On the other hand, the main positives relate to travel for pleasure and research. Locations that are not currently occupied by traditional societies were effectively without purpose. Many of them, ranging from remote islands to terrain with inhospitable weather such as Mt. Everest, now offer attractive experiences for the intrepid traveller. For researchers, the benefits are even more tangible. The best known example of this was the Galapagos islands where Darwin sailed more than a hundred years ago conducted foundational research for his theory of evolution. Since then, the ability to explore new areas has resulted in thousands of discoveries and advances related to archaeology, medicine, marine life, and the environment.

In conclusion, despite the injurious impacts of tourism, it is my strong belief that the opening up of unexplored regions is a net positive. However, governments must still regulate such travel to mitigate the inherent dangers.

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