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2021-09-18 19:56:49 #Task1

The diagrams illustrate five different sort of energy sources of France namely: coal, gas, petrol, nuclear and other, in years 1995 and 2005.

Overall, proportion of produced energy by petrol plunge over a decade whereas percentage of nuclear power soar during the period. Also, other remained production witnessed negligible change.
In first year, 1995, petrol power station sustained with just under 30% of energy to France and it declined considerably by approximately 10% at the end. Before growing noticeably to just over one in ten, nuclear energy ranked the fourth in providing energy with former proportion, about 6,5% (in 2005 and 1995 respectively).

There was a minimal increase in quantity of coal power from just around 29% to somewhere in the vicinity of 30%, a moderate rise of a percent in 10 years. Proportion of gas energy, meanwhile, underwent a negligible increase soar to less than third in 2005 and it was the second largest resource of power after coal. By contrast, other production almost doubled to around 10% from initial index 4,9%.
233 viewsEldor Zarifov, 16:56
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2021-09-18 19:56:33
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2021-09-18 15:05:47 #Task1

The given diagrams compare a quantity of eight different aspects Turkish economy in years 2000 and 2016.

All in all, proportion of spending on agriculture underwent a plunge over the period shown, while spending on construction grew. Also, country spent the same proportion in both years on healthcare and education.

There had been a noticeable soar in spending on construction to 10% by 2016, a increase of 7% in 16 years. In the beginning, 2000, 24% of Turkey economic budget went on agriculture sector and it saw a considerable decline of 10% at the end. By contrast, expenditure of healthcare and education system ranked the proportion as large as it was 17 percent.

The largest percentage (16%) belonged to trade utilities and transportation in 2016 after rising by 2%. Leisure and hospitality, meanwhile, accounted for 17% with the second highest proportion in 2000 so did it ranked former position in 2016 but with quite a low one (14%). Moreover, manufacturing and finance/business and other sectors rose moderately by approximately 4% simultaneously.
204 viewsEldor Zarifov, edited  12:05
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2021-09-18 15:05:16
181 viewsEldor Zarifov, 12:05
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2021-08-26 19:21:32
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The two pie charts above show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010.
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The given diagrams compare four retail categories on Internet platforms of Canada during the period from 2005 to 2010.

All in all, all retail sectors underwent a noticeable change over the period shown. Both shares of video games and food/beverage increased markedly while remaining them saw a moderate decline.

In first year, 2005, a quarter of online sales was belonged to household furniture and there was a considerable plunge to the lowest unit (15 percent) following 5 years. Purchasing meals and beverage online was responsible for approximately one-third of all sectors in 2010, but initial share was 22%.

Initially, Distribution of video game, meanwhile, accounted to 18 percent then it witnessed a growth of 5% in 2010. In contrast to former percentage of sold electronic equipments, latter ones was less by 10 percent.
190 viewsEldor Zarifov, edited  16:21
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2021-08-25 14:57:32
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The chart shows the average monthly temperature in 3 major cities.
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A glance at the diagram provided illustrates normal monthly temperature faraway places; namely Dubai, Paris, Sydney.

All in all, the hottest days are undergone by Dubai whereas it is freezing in Paris.

In first month, January, temperature in Sydney is just nearly 25° C and declines moderately to the lowest point just about 12⁰ Celsius in July. This is followed by noticeable growth to almost as high as its initial level in December. The figure for Dubai, meanwhile, witnesses an exponential increase from just nearly 20⁰ in January to a peak of just over 35⁰ C in August before plunging rapidly to somewhere in the vicinity of 22⁰ C at the end.

There is an enormous boom in temperature of Sydney from 5⁰ to 20⁰ between January and July, a rise of 15⁰ Celsius in 7 months. Then it remains stable in this temperature following a month and backs to former index 5⁰ in December.
166 viewsEldor Zarifov, edited  11:57
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2021-08-25 05:05:55
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A glance at the diagram given illustrates 3 different ways of purchasing music during the period from 2011 to 2018.

All in all, rank of CDs buying was replaced by streaming music whereas downloading remained stable over the period shown.

In first year, 2011, the highest share of purchasing music belonged to CD sale, just nearly 60%. Then, there was an exponential plunge from initial level to somewhere in the vicinity of 25 percent between 2011 and 2018, a decrease of around 30% in 7 years. Figure for, meanwhile, streaming soared considerably by just under 25 percent before overtaking that for CDs in 2016. This was followed by a period of noticeable growth to peak of about 40%.
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Rising from less than 35% in 2011 to just over 40% in 2014, share of downloading then declined markedly to almost as high as its former rank in 2011. Finally, it stood the second with negligible change in 7 years.
148 viewsEldor Zarifov, 02:05
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2021-08-25 03:03:20 #grammar_paraphrase

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I will depart for abroad when I graduate from university.

I will depart for abroad when graduate from university.

I will depart for abroad after graduating from university.

Only after graduating from university will I depart for abroad.

It is abroad that I depart for after graduating from university.

What I do after graduating from university is depart for.

What I depart for after graduating from university is abroad.
138 viewsEldor Zarifov, edited  00:03
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2021-08-25 02:49:08 #environment Mankind is focusing on preserving the world of fauna by spending anything whereas my position is quite remote from their perspective. Actually, humans merely are demanded not to disturb existence, plus aid them to survive and not to be extinction…
130 viewsEldor Zarifov, edited  23:49
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2021-08-24 18:16:12
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A glance at the diagram given illustrates distribution of the Chinese 3 age groups by collecting information from 1960 and with prediction to 2050.

Overall, position of 15-64 age group cannot be replaced over the period shown whereas a quantity of elderly people was the least.

In the beginning, 1960, population under 14 years old stood the first share with just about 45 percent, this was followed by a period of marked decline to half as high as its original level in 2020. The following 30 years will undergo a minimal plunge to 17,5%. Number of retired people, meanwhile, remained stable between 10% and approximately 12%, before soaring tremendously to somewhere in the vicinity of 25% in 2050.

There was an exponential rise in 15-64 age group from around 37 percent to a peak of 70% between 1960 and 2020, a growth of just nearly 35% in six decades. Then figure for this is about to see a considerable decrease to 52,5% at the end.
129 viewsEldor Zarifov, edited  15:16
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