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IELTS academic writing task 2Problem and solution essayQUESTIONSStudents are becoming more and more reliant on technology.What are some of the problems associated with reliance on computers and what are some of the possible solutions ?MODEL ANSWERLearners are becoming ever more dependent on technology, such as the Internet and mobile devices. This essay believes the main problems
associated with dependence on computers is the lack of original thought and copying original work from others and suggests critical thinking classes and writing analysis software as the most
viable solutions.
The principal problems with over-reliance on technology are people not being able to think for themselves and plagiarism. With access to so much information, students often rely on other people’s opinions instead of forming their own. As well as this, they often use search engines to answer a question and simply copy the text from a website, rather than thinking about the question. This practice is not only prohibited in schools and universities but also
stunts a student’s intellectual development because they will never truly think for themselves, which is what university is supposed to really be for. For example, many teachers complain that students copy web pages straight from Wikipedia word for word rather than giving a reasoned answer to their questions.
Solutions to these worrying problems are special classes to focus on critical thinking and teachers using anti-plagiarism software to detect copying. If teachers create situations where students have to
infer meaning and express opinions based on a small amount of information, this will ensure that students have an opportunity to develop these skills. Also, if students know that their assignments are being checked for plagiarism, this will be enough to
deter them from doing so. For instance, many universities already use this kind of software to scan course work for plagiarism and it could be extended to include all homework, by learners in both secondary and
tertiary education.In conclusion, the main problems with
overuse of technology in education are the lack of original thought and plagiarism and these can be solved through special classes that teach students
analytical skills and the use of plagiarism detection software.
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