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2021-08-29 14:34:23 Learn the collocations and develop your English as native speakers' as soon as you memorise them you may complete the exercises to do more practice. Open / Comment

2021-08-29 14:05:37 Main body2
As for future predictions, the given three countries are predicted to experience a significant growth in the number of old people, by around 5% in 2030. Open / Comment

2021-08-29 13:56:30 Main body1

More precise, in 1988, Germany had by far the highest proportion of people aged 65 and above, while the figures for Canada and the UK stood at 16.32% and 14.23% respectively.
The trends for Canada and Germany were upward, with the former ascending by around 4% and the latter growing by about 5% in 2000. In contrast, the percentage of the UK's aged population did not witness any notable changes during this period.

Vocabulary
1. More precise - with more details
2. By far - much ( used to emphasize to the info)
3. Proportion of - percentage of
4. People aged - old people
5. The elderly - old people
6. Trends - changes
7. To be upward - smth has an increase ( # to be downward)
8. Former - the first
9. Latter - the last
10. Ascending - growing
11. Witness - see
12. Notable - noticable Open / Comment

2021-08-29 13:44:14 Overall, it is apparent from the table, all three different countries experienced a noticable increase in the number of the elderly from 1988 to 2000, with the exception of the UK whose figure stayed the same. In the foreseeable future, it is predicted that all the three countries will have more aged people in 2030 than they did in the past. Open / Comment

2021-08-29 13:29:14 And it is time to write overview!
In the overview paragraph, you should write the general description of the chart, not mentioned all crucial features, they are kept to state in the body parapgraphs. Open / Comment

2021-08-29 13:26:06 As you have a quick glance at the introduction I have paraphrased the title of the table.
For more information, the name of countries have been added with the word "NAMELY", "PROPORTION" is used as a synonym of percentage,
what's more?, "future estimates"
is replaced with prediction. Open / Comment

2021-08-29 13:22:14 The table given compares the proportion of people who are at the age of 65 and over in three countries namely, Canada, Germany and the UK in the years 1988 and 2000 as well as future estimates for 2030. Open / Comment