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2022-01-03 23:05:21 Good one. Use #review for others to review ur work Open / Comment

2022-01-03 20:46:42 He smiled to know she'd never find him again,
And no longer he needs a forest to hide,
Everything she wished to find in a person,
Was his true self she asked him to keep burried inside .

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2022-01-03 15:10:14 Today I saw death in the eyes, she smiled at me and told me that he loved me.
Today I saw death in the eyes, I felt fragile and small.
Today I saw death in the eyes, I don't want to look at it again.
Today I saw death in the eyes and she looked back at me.
I'm not prepared for the slow walk of her.
I'm scared, for all the things I left behind.
I let out a slow sigh! I don't want to stop breathing.
But here I face her, with a true sigh.
And I suffer at the same time, for what I lack to love.
Oh! Death now that you are looking at me, touch my soul and spare my life.
Oh! Reason in misery, focus your mind, death is not looking at you.
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2022-01-03 12:44:06 How shall I live within this secrecy,
That my petal should only bloom under a canopy?
Oh, He, above—who claims to love me,
Why can't you let me be?
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2022-01-03 08:15:24 When your hands
Trail on my soft skin,
I lose myself
With you
My love.
What else can I ask,
For this eternity,
Than our entwined bodies,
Into one, forever...
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2022-01-02 16:30:38 He scribbled.
She gave meaning to it.
Mysteriously they became an art!
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2021-12-30 23:03:20 Noesis (vi)

i pour out
love where
sadness pelts
because i've felt
how drained
it tastes
to be starved
of the world
you deserve.

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2021-12-30 19:06:32 His surviving words had lifeless meaning.
But her music was certain.
Mysteriously, their song gave hope! #review Open / Comment

2021-12-30 12:46:44 What's wrong with the light?
Have I gone blind?
Why can't I see it anymore?
Why can't I see it entering inside me, Wiping off all this emptiness?
Why doesn't it burn my soul anymore?
Have I lost my soul or the light ?

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2021-12-30 12:17:57 His surviving words had lifeless meaning.
But her music was certain.
Mysteriously, their song gave hope! #review Open / Comment