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2021-09-13 19:31:04 ​​​​​​​​​​#Essay141 #Writing #Task2

Agree / Disagree

Q:Some people think that a person improves their intellectual skills
more when doing group activities. To what extent do you agree?

Answer:


In recent decades, many researchers have studied the importance of group-level cognition. Indeed, to my mind, there is now convincing evidence that group activities improve the intelligence of individuals. In this essay, I shall examine how research in team-games and study-groups supports this view.

To begin with, team-games clearly require individuals to perform a diverse range of rapid mental calculations. This is because, in a sporting context, players must predict and anticipate possible actions within tight time constraints. For example, a recent Cambridge study showed that soccer players can – within the span of seconds – calculate over a dozen different permutations that could result from a single soccer related action. Such predictive powers clearly improve players’ mental abilities and result from activities performed in a group context.

Secondly, study-groups enable individuals to obtain information that they could not acquire in isolation. This is because peer feedback allows individuals to refine their understanding of concepts and to also learn new information from other members in the study-group. For example, a study by The British Institute for Learning found that, if individuals participated in study-groups, they had a far more objective and sophisticated understanding of a topic than learners who were not part of study-groups. Therefore, it is certainly the case that learning in a group improves an individual’s mental abilities.

In conclusion, I strongly agree with the notion that group activities improve intellectual abilities. In the future, we will certainly see schools take greater measures to ensure that more group-level cognition occurs in the classroom.

Total words: 253

Band: 8.0+


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Writing Task 1, 2 Topics in Uzbekistan — 11.09.2021

TASK 1: Line graph ,about snow depth at ski resort in New Zealand.

TASK 2: Some people say that art (e.g. painting, music, poetry) can be made by everyone whereas others believe that it can be only made by those with special abilities.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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2021-09-12 14:30:13 ​​​​​​​​​​#Essay140 #Writing #Task2

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Q: School children are becoming far too dependent on computers. This is having an alarming effect on reading and writing skills. Teachers need to avoid using computers in the classroom at all costs and go back to teaching basic study skills.
Do you agree or disagree?

Answer:


Nowadays, modern technology has totally changed our approach to study. In many countries, students no longer have to copy notes by hand from the board; instead the teacher gives them a photocopy or an electronic one. Rather than messy ink and pen, students also present a typed-up copy of their assignments. Their computer even checks their spellings as they go. In fact, some people believe that modern technology does a lot of our thinking for us and, as a result, we are losing our ability to think for ourselves.

In my opinion, spelling skills have definitely deteriorated in recent years. So many young people use mobile phones to send text messages where speed and conciseness are more important than spelling or grammar. Some teachers complain that these students take the same attitude toward their written assignments.

On the other hand, typed assignments are much easier to read and much neater. Frankly, I find some notes or tests which are often handwritten almost impossible to read. Doctors, for example, have often had a reputation for illegible handwriting which could lead to disastrous medical mistakes. Perhaps it is time we focused not on handwriting but presenting information as accurately as possible.

Another advantage of computers is that access to the internet has opened up a world of learning to us. We no longer have to wait for a book that has already been borrowed from the library before we can do our research. In fact, the internet can clearly be used to research information in the same way as a library but more conveniently.

On the whole, rather than holding students back, I believe modern technology has actually improved standards of education considerably.

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2021-09-10 20:31:10 ​​​​​​​​​​#Essay139 #Writing #Task2

Discuss both views

Q: It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe it is better to live in a countryside. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Answer:


Quality of life is often the main factor for people when choosing their place of residence. Some people believe that living in bigger cities offers greater opportunities, while in the opinion of others, life in the countryside is better. In my view, living in big cities is more attractive for young people, whereas calm and quiet rural or regional areas are more appealing for older individuals.

On the one hand, highly developed urban centers attract younger people for a variety of reasons. First, there are countless opportunities for all sorts of jobs. For instance, in large metropolises such as London or New York, it is easier to pursue an artistic career, because of the higher demand for art there. Second, urban areas offer better and more diverse opportunities for a vibrant social life with their rich night life and music festivals. Third, in cities it is easy to get around, since transport is well organized, and traveling to different parts in the city is easy. As a result of such conveniences, cities are magnets for young people to establish their lives and raise their families there. Nevertheless, the frenetic pace of life, pollution and weaker sense of community in large cities might be serious drawbacks for senior citizens.

On the other hand, non-urban areas are quiet and calm. Although the variety of jobs is limited in rural areas, the stress that would be otherwise experienced in a metropolitan area does not exist there. People living in such places are healthier both physically and mentally. In fact, studies show that their life expectancy is higher, hence a desired place to live for those who have retired. However, there might be some downsides for students and younger adults. In the countryside, almost everything is far away and public transport is sometimes not an option since services are not frequent or regular in remote areas. Most universities are also located in the centers of cities, and as a result, students living in rural areas would need to drive long distances to neighboring cities.

The bottom line is that obviously both urban and rural areas offer benefits. While the former offers an ideal choice for career starters, the latter is more suitable for those who are especially looking forward to a peaceful style of life.

Total words:381

Band: 7.5


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2021-09-09 19:30:15 "Movies in English" kanali obunachilari uchun maxsus sovg'a. Eng qiziqarli filmlarni janrlar bo'yicha bir postga to'pladik. Ushbu sovg'ani do'stlaringiz bilan ham ulashing!

HORROR -
• Penance Lane • Shark Season
• The Shallows • Ghost House
• Jaws • Jason
• The Nest • IT
• Howl • Crawl
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COMEDY -
• Coming 2 America • Arizona
• Annie • Pink Panther
• Yes Man • SPY
• Growns Up • Home Alone
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ACTION -
• The Legion • The One
• Inception • Ant-Man
• Hancock • Tarzan
• Crank • Overdrive
• Underground • Big Game
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ROMANCE -
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• Two Lovers • Hangover
• Cry Now • The Fault
• Five Feet • Christmas Love
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FOR KIDS -
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• Joey and Ella • Astro Boy
• Pets • Robinson Crusoe
• Boss Baby • Home
• Garfield • Luca
• Raya • Magic
• Fearless • Robinsons
• The Kids • Zoo Wars
• Turbo • Igor
• Planes • Ralph
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