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2021-08-27 18:00:23 ​​​​​​​​​​#Essay132 #Writing #Task2

Discuss both views

Q: Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is best to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Answer:


We all encounter difficult circumstances at some stage in life. Sometimes, we are overwhelmed with a challenging situation for which there appears to be no clear solution. There is often much debate around whether we should accept unpleasant situations or not, particularly when it comes to work or money. While some people believe that acceptance is sometimes a good choice when faced with these problems, I am of the opinion that we can first attempt to overcome them.

There are some reasons people accept difficult situations when they occur. Some people think it is simply beyond their capabilities to confront or deal with a trying situation or event, and hence attempting to tackle these issues causes them more stress and frustration without bringing about any significant change. Another reason is the fear of encountering risk or failure while seeking a change or a solution for such situations. Such people in fact tend to think about the barriers more than the potential benefits that a change can bring for them.

But they can at least try to overcome unexpected difficulties instead of simply accepting them. For example, if someone loses their job, they should accept one with lower pay instead of becoming a burden to society. Additionally, resolving a difficult situation will equip us with valuable experience for the future. Many successful professional sportspeople have gone on achieving stunning success because they refused to give up when they encountered poverty or lack of support early in their careers.

In conclusion, although accepting undesirable situations sometimes has benefits, I maintain that in the first step it is better to make an effort to overcome these problems. If people know how to deal with difficulties, they will definitely be more successful in their life.

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2021-08-26 17:03:14 ​​​​​​​​​​#Essay131 #Writing #Task2

Agree / Disagree

Q:Fast food is becoming one part of life everywhere, this has bad effects on our lifestyle and diet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In most countries, pre-pared food has become increasingly popular amongst people, which it can leads to a serious repercussions. I strongly believe that, fast food has a harmful and insoluble effects on people’s health. In forthcoming paragraph, i shall explain why these type of foods are becoming a huge threat to having a balanced diet.

People’s diet has changed over the time. For example, due to having full schedule and working for a long hours, people normally trying to find an easy way to rustle up food in no time. Therefore, pre-pared food is an optimal choice for those people with a busy life. Although, these foods are popular for being prepared fast and conveniently, they can inevitably lead to various diseases after a period of time. Also,there is no need to say that, junk food contains too much fat, oil and sugar that causes a lot of health issues, such as diabetes, heart disease or obesity.

However, population in developed countries are increasingly overweight . According to a research conducted on junk foods, the number of people consume this type of food are growing up steadily , as a result they have anticipated that the human lifespan will be shorter than it used to be. In addition, convenience foods are too much irresistible and addictive in a way that most young people has grown up on a diet of fast foods. Also , in the past few years, dependency of people on fast food has surged significantly with its dangerous results.

To sum up, ready-to-eat foods have become an indispensable part of human life, despite of their harmful consequences. Also , junk food is negatively effecting the lifestyle of people.

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2021-08-25 19:00:28 ​​​​​​​​#Essay130 #Writing #Task2

Agree / Disagree

Q: Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Answer:


Some people claim that individuals cannot improve the environment and that only governments and large companies are able to do that, whereas others believe that everyone can contribute to environmental protection. I contend that both individuals and governments can do their own share meaningfully in that regard.

Individuals could take a variety of measures to improve the environment. They can save energy by turning off all electric and electronic devices which are not being used. The process of producing energy releases tons of emissions and waste into the environment. Therefore, the less energy we consume, the better it is for the environment. Besides, people can dispose of rubbish appropriately and place recyclable waste in designated bins. This reduces environmental pollution on a large scale. In addition, each person can minimize their use of metal and especially plastics, including plastic bags and metal cans. It can take thousands of years for such materials to decompose in the natural environment.

Nevertheless, in some special contexts, only governments and large enterprises can make significant improvements to the environment. Take nuclear plants, for instance, which can accidentally leak radioactive waste into the environment. The voice of an individual is not strong enough to change the situation. Some legislation has to be enacted by governments to guard against the release of such waste. More importantly, air pollution and climate change affect all countries in the world. This problem is thus best addressed by the cooperation of all nations. With financial support from large companies in the world, governments can also run campaigns to raise people’s awareness about air pollution and the need for environmental protection.

In conclusion, individuals can contribute to environmental protection by reducing their use of non-biodegradable materials and energy consumption, while governments and corporations can help reduce air pollution, nuclear waste and other large-scale pollution.

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