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2021-08-25 09:00:15
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2021-08-24 19:00:17 ​​​​​​​​#Essay129 #Writing #Task2

Discuss both views

Q: Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is best to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Answer:


We all encounter difficult circumstances at some stage in life. Sometimes, we are overwhelmed with a challenging situation for which there appears to be no clear solution. There is often much debate around whether we should accept unpleasant situations or not, particularly when it comes to work or money. While some people believe that acceptance is sometimes a good choice when faced with these problems, I am of the opinion that we can first attempt to overcome them.

There are some reasons people accept difficult situations when they occur. Some people think it is simply beyond their capabilities to confront or deal with a trying situation or event, and hence attempting to tackle these issues causes them more stress and frustration without bringing about any significant change. Another reason is the fear of encountering risk or failure while seeking a change or a solution for such situations. Such people in fact tend to think about the barriers more than the potential benefits that a change can bring for them.

But they can at least try to overcome unexpected difficulties instead of simply accepting them. For example, if someone loses their job, they should accept one with lower pay instead of becoming a burden to society. Additionally, resolving a difficult situation will equip us with valuable experience for the future. Many successful professional sportspeople have gone on achieving stunning success because they refused to give up when they encountered poverty or lack of support early in their careers.

In conclusion, although accepting undesirable situations sometimes has benefits, I maintain that in the first step it is better to make an effort to overcome these problems. If people know how to deal with difficulties, they will definitely be more successful in their life.

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2021-08-23 17:02:03
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2021-08-23 16:00:16
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2021-08-22 19:30:30 ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​#RecentWriting #Task1 #Task2

Writing Task 1, 2 Topics in Uzbekistan — 21.08.2021

TASK 1: The table below shows the percentage of adults in urban and rural areas who took part in four free time activities in 1990 and 2010. (Below)

TASK 2: In the modern world, It is possible to shop, work, comminucate via the internet without any face-to-face contact.

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2021-08-22 18:30:21
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2021-08-21 20:00:00 ​​​​​​​​#Essay128 #Writing #Task2

Agree / Disagree

Q:Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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It is sometimes argued that overseas tourists should be charged more than local people to visit important sites and monuments. While I disagree with this view, I believe that tourist attractions should be made free for everyone to see.

The main reason why foreign visitors and local people should pay equally for tourist attractions is because tourists, already contribute financially toward the economy of the country they visit. For example, they use many different services such as restaurants, hotels and shops all of which clearly bring a lot of money to a country. If foreign visitors are made required to pay more, however, it is likely that they will not want to visit the host country again in the future. This might therefore poorly reflect on countries' economies, as fewer tourists will visit those countries.

On the other hand, I would argue with those who think that tourist attractions should be paid to visit. That is to say, when it comes to history and culture people ought not to be made pay to learn about them. I strongly support those who believe that historical and cultural attractions belong to people, not to the governments who often try to keep them away from the public. Moreover, since tourist attractions have become too commercial, people have to spend huge amount of money to see them. This means that some people simply cannot afford to see famous landmarks of their country.

In conclusion, although I do not support the idea that foreign visitors should pay more for tourist attractions than local visitors, I believe they should be made accessible to everyone.

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2021-08-20 20:00:18
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2021-08-20 18:00:14
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