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2021-08-05 10:46:55 The table compares the amount of money a retired single person and a couple need in Australia.

It is clear that a retired couple spend more than a retired single person does. While a retired single person’s highest expense is housing, it is leisure activities that account for the largest expense of retired couples.

The difference between the amounts of money going on housing is not big for both groups of people, which is only 10 dollars. However, there are noticeable differences when it comes to other expenses. Leisure and health make up 140 and 122 dollars of a retired single person’s total expenditure, which are significantly lower than those of a retired couple, at 200 and 177 dollars respectively.

Interestingly, both a retired single person and a couple spend almost the same amount of money on transport, at around 108 dollars. This is in marked contrast to clothing, food and other expenses, which cost the double amount if two people are living together. In total, a single person after retirement needs 684 dollars, whereas a retired couple should have 931 dollars to cover all the expenses. Open / Comment

2021-08-05 10:46:01 The table below shows how much money a single person and a couple In Australia need after they retire.

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2021-08-03 19:57:17 Describe a time when you tried to do something, but it was not very successful. Open / Comment

2021-08-02 11:36:37 Many students find it difficult to focus or pay attention at school nowadays.
What are the reasons?
What can be done to solve this?

It is true that many students in schools have problems with their concentration. I believe that modern technologies are to blame in this situation, and some necessary steps can be taken to help students overcome this difficulty.

One of the key factors reducing students’ attention span is modern technologies. This is because many young people spend a considerable amount of their time on mobile phones. When they are using them, they mostly watch short videos on social media platforms, such as Facebook and Instagram. Watching one-minute videos a lot, young people unknowingly reprogram their brain losing natural capacity to focus. However sad it is, these young people have already got used to focusing on something for as little as one minute. When they have to focus on something for long time, their concentration starts to waver after a minute.

To tackle this problem, both parents and schools should take action. By limiting the time their children spend using their devices, parents can help their children avoid watching short videos, thus eliminating the root of the problem. However, the elimination of the cause may not produce intended results unless schools also step up to the plate. They should make some adjustments to their curriculum so that students can study in an environment that does not let their attention wander. If, for example, schools implement Pomodoro technique, which is known as a concentration booster, students’ ability to focus may greatly improve.

Given that it is mobile phones and social media platforms that negatively affected young people’s ability to concentrate, parents should immediately restrict the use of them. To fully eradicate this problem, schools should also take some measures.

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2021-08-02 07:40:15 Make a sentence! Open / Comment

2021-08-01 20:42:02 Describe a time when your friends had argument.

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2021-07-30 15:37:58 Practise your spoken Еnglish

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2021-07-30 12:40:12 Some people think that public health within a country can be improved by government making laws regarding nutritious food. Others, however, think that health is a matter of personal choice and responsibility.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some think that government should make eating nutritious food mandatory to improve the health of the population while others feel that people themselves are responsible for their health. Although passing a law that states everyone has to consume healthy food is a good idea to some extent, I am of the opinion that it is indeed a matter of personal choice.

Some may think that people will have good health if governments introduce a new law making people eat nutritious food. More often than not, people are unwilling to consume nutritious foods, even though they know about their health benefits. If it was something they have to observe, they would have no other option but eat foods that have nutritional value. When choosing food to eat, they would go for healthy ones mostly because they know what lays in store for violating the law.

However, I believe that people have to shoulder the responsibility if they are to enjoy good health. At the end of the day, it is people themselves who should be concerned about their health. Instead of sitting on the couch and spending hours in front of the screen, they should make a habit of doing physical exercises on a regular basis. Also, they must watch what they eat even if no one tells them to do so. By just controlling their diet, they can ward off many diseases. As soon as people hold themselves accountable for their health and start exercising regularly as well as eating healthy food, they will see great improvements in their health.

To conclude, while new laws regarding nutritious food may lead people to eat healthy food, I believe that only when individuals feel responsible for their health and take action accordingly will the overall public health be improved.

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2021-07-30 07:28:16 Make a sentence! Open / Comment