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Opinion

Q: International tourism is now more common than ever before, some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not.

Answer:

Worldwide travelling has been persisting in increasing for 30 years. A certain number of individuals claim that it is fine, whereas others do not. Although it has brought some moral issues, I would believe that its overall impact has in fact been positive. Both advantages and drawbacks will be represented in this essay.

To start, international holiday making has several benefits. First of all, it is undeniable fact that tourism significantly has ameliorated infrastructures of dozens of states. Namely, high-rise property like Burj-khalifa in Dubai did not exist even at the beginning of the second millennium. It was particularly erected in 2004 as an eye-catching sky-scraper to attract more visitors from all over the world. Secondly, it doubles government's income and employs more citizens. For instance, since there is an immense demand for workers to provide service for tourists and to urbanise cities, inhabitants of country will peculiarly stress on their minors' education, providing a prosperous future for country and population, additionally, locals would be in companies' employ rather than going abroad, which makes economy stable.

In contrast, it may bring numerous disadvantages. Firstly, cynical patterns of behaviour and clothing have come owing to the global travelling. A good illustration of this can be disrespecting older ones and following western dressing habits. Secondly, it is responsible for carrying wide range of viruses such as "COVID-19" and creates an ideal chance for aliments to spread throughout the world. In particular, according to statistics, in 2020 almost more than half of countries all over the world closed their gates to tourists in order not to be affected.

In conclusion, global tourism can be accepted provided that moral and cultural values are highly comprehended and followed. Despite it has certain drawbacks, I opine that it should be less hazardous if government and inhabitants have pertinent ideology.

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Problem / Solution

Q:In many countries, crime rates among younger people have been rising in recent years.
What are the causes of this, and what are the possible solutions?

Answer:

It is true that the number of young offenders is increasing in the vast majority of countries. While certain factors like poverty can be the culprits of this development, there are steps to be taken to address this issue.

There are several factors that influence youngsters making them commit crimes. Firstly, poverty can be considered as the main culprit since the prevalence of criminal actions among poor people is notably high as they struggle to meet their daily needs. Secondly, violent video games and movies that include robbery or murder may increase the susceptibility of an individual to real-life criminal actions. In fact, people who engage with this sort of entertainment tend to hurt people with ease and may also struggle with distinguishing right from wrong. Finally, friends have a great influence on a person’s behavior and people feel more relaxed while breaching when they see people close to them doing the same actions.

However, several measures can be taken to reduce the crime rates among young people. Firstly, government should financially help impoverished families thereby creating a win-win situation. Secondly, the government should put restrictions, such as age limits, to watching violent movies or playing games of this sort for children which can mitigate detrimental effects. Finally, parents should be strict and keep track of their children’s behavior and friends they hang out with from the early childhood as those early years will have significant impact on person’s future life. Therefore, government together with adults has a key role in reducing the crime rates among young people.

In conclusion, crime rates which are increasingly prevalent among young people is caused by several factors, with poverty being the most pronounced, and can be solved if necessary measures are taken.

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Advantage / Disadvantage

Q: In some places, money earned from tourism has become an important part of the economy. What are the advantages and disadvantages of relying on tourism as a major source of revenue?

Answer:

Many places in the world depend on tourism to bring money to their area. There are both benefits and drawbacks to this situation.

Many people greet tourism with open arms because of the boost it gives to the local economy. Tourism means that restaurants and hotels, stores and roads will be built. There will be new opportunities for business owners and new jobs in construction and services for the local population.

Money flowing into an area may look like a good thing, but there is another side to the story. Many places have a tourist season. That means there are a lot of jobs part of the year and then nothing for the rest of the year. So, employment is only for part of the time. People may earn a lot during the tourist season, but since this money has to last them for the rest of the year, it really is not very much.

In addition, all the new businesses and structures that are created in a tourist area do not necessarily benefit the local residents. Prices are almost always higher in a tourist area. Tourists may be able to shop in the stores and eat at the restaurants, but most of the local residents probably cannot afford it. Tourists enjoy leisure activities such as golf, tennis or horseback riding, while local residents work hard to earn as much money as they can during the tourist season.

In conclusion, tourism brings in money, but it is not always as good as it looks, as it cannot be relied upon as a constant source of income and as not everybody benefits from it.

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