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Agree / Disagree

Q: Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Answer:

Every year, thousands of people apply for various courses in universities. However, it is sometimes argued that universities should have equal numbers of male and female students in every course. I completely disagree with this idea.

First, some subjects are more suited to, and have more interest from, one gender than the other. For example, technology courses often have more male student applications, while those who apply for nursing courses are mostly female. Also computer science traditionally attracts more interest from male students, while female students tend to have more interest in language courses or other humanities programs. Therefore, it would be difficult and impractical to place equal number of male and female students for all tertiary courses.

Second, it would not be fair if admission to university courses depended not on individual ability but on the applicant’s gender. Universities should base the decisions to accept applications according to exam score and curriculum vitae. That gives all students, irrespective of their gender, more motivation to study hard at school and get good scores. If a male student fails to be accepted for a university course because of a limited quota for male students, it will be unfair and it will cause much controversy. In addition, if universities just choose their students according to their gender, it will be counterproductive and detrimental to their reputation. This is because the quality of education is likely to decrease and the qualifications given by those universities will be of a lower standard.

In conclusion, I believe that applications for universities should be accepted according to the student’s ability and talents instead of their gender. It would be unfair and would lead to several difficulties to have an equal number of male and female students in every university course.

Total words: 294

Band: 7.0+

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TASK 1: The table and bar chart show household expenditure by major categories.

TASK 2: Some researchs show taht overeating is as harmful as smoking, therefore some food advertising should be banned as smoking banned in some countries.

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2021-07-24 10:30:13 ​​​​​​#Essay113 #Writing #Task2

Discuss both views

Q: Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However, others believe that other media are better sources of news. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Answer:

It is true for many people that reading news in newspapers is the most effective way to learn about current local and international events as well as broaden their horizons, while others claim that getting news via media like TV, radio, or the internet is better. From my point of view, although reading news in newspapers is a great way to obtain information, I would argue that using other types of media is preferable.

On the one hand, reading news in newspapers has a range of benefits. First, information in the newspapers is usually close to reality and subject to better editorial control than news from other types of media. Moreover, newspapers provide analysis such that readers can have a deep understanding of the issues involved. In contrast, if people read news through the Internet, they might be misled by numerous fake news. Additionally, as newspaper reporters and writers are all professionally trained, they can cover news from an impartial perspective which gives the reader a more-balanced view.

On the other hand, other media like TV, the Internet and radio can be a great way to keep up with the news. The first reason is that nowadays many people have to work for long hours and their schedule can be quite hectic, so listening to the news on the radio while commuting to and from work is more convenient than reading newspapers. On top of that, as news on TV and radio is read out loud, people with visual disabilities can access the news without any troubles. Lastly, thanks to advances in technology, the latest news can be delivered to a person’s smartphone. Therefore, they can always keep up to date with the latest.

In conclusion, despite the fact that reading news in newspapers might have some advantages, I believe that using other media such as TV, radio and the internet is a better way to access news.

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Agree / Disagree

Q:Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Answer:

As we are living in the century of democracy and gender equality, I think men and women should have equal educational opportunities. However, I do not agree that there should be a separation of genders while choosing university applicants.

First of all, receiving students based on their gender would be against the UN gender equality rights. According to it, people should not be offended and separated because of their sexes. Therefore, no matter whether they are male or female, student numbers on any course depend on the applications that the institution receives and performances of each applicants in the exam. University should base its admission to qualification of person’s knowledge not his/her gender. By doing it, I believe that both men and women would have the same opportunities, and the competition would be fair, too. For example, let us say there are only 20 places for female applicants. Not accepting 21st applicant girl with high grades in favour of a male applicant who had lower grades from the exam, indeed, would be so unfair. In other words, both male and female students should compete with each other to be accepted for the course.

Second of all, every person has his/her personal preference of choosing job. Some types of occupations are more popular among boys not girls. For instance, my faculty at the university is “Management in IT service” and it is not very popular between females. That is why we have only 4 female students and 21 male students. As we cannot force men to choose nursery courses, it would be unrealistic if a university wants to fill this kind of courses with equal number of girls and boys.

To sum up, universities should not accept participants according to their gender as it will be unfair and may have repercussions

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