IELTS Essays Band 9 | IELTS Writing 9.0

2021-07-20 16:00:18 ​​​​​​#Essay111 #Writing #Task2

Agree / Disagree

Q:It is impossible to help all people around the world in need so governments should focus on people from their own countries. What extent do you agree or disagree?

Answer:

It is often argued that governments are not able to assist all individuals who need an assistance in every corner of the world as a consequence , they have to pay attention fully to people who are from their own countries. I, however, strongly disagree with the idea that if all governments tried to help together , they would manage it and be compelling power owing to developed countries and a desire for increasing the bridge of understanding between nations.

With regards to developed countries , all people who are in need around the world would be helped by governments. Although some believe that it is unmanageable to help world population , I deem that it could be accomplished by governments due to progressed countries. In other words, there are enough developed countries around the globe , whose financial status are higher and have grown well so some of them are advanced in medicine while some are excellent in other fields. To illustrate , there are several countries donate various goods for homeless and poor population every year. Hence, such countries could support world population in different ways.

Moreover, a number of poor and less developed countries not only such nations, but also progressed countries are being provided with crucial and important items and products by other countries in order to boost relationship between them. Even though some people consider that all governments should focus on their own population , I advocate the idea that comradeship and relationship play a significant role in our life so governments ought to think about it too. As an example , during the lockdown all governments supported with each other to improve bonds. This is because , if governments assist other ones , they will be helped when they are in need.

To sum up , it is true that helping all people is difficult enough , but governments should not stop assisting and supporting all people as much as possible due to rich countries and respect of nations.

Total words: 323

Band: 7.0+

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2021-07-19 08:40:24 ​​​​​​#Essay110 #Writing #Task2

Discuss both views

Q: Some people think that public health within a country can be improved by government making laws regarding nutritious food. Others, however, think that health is a matter of personal choice and responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Answer:

Personal and public health are tightly related to food choices. While some people believe that the government should regulate nutrition to ensure public wellness, others argue that it should be people’s decision whether to pursue a healthy diet or not. This essay will discuss both points of view and explain why the authorities should not control the types of food people can buy.

Legislators could impose laws concerning nutritious food in an effort to have a healthier population, hence decreasing public health costs. Even if this could be considered a good idea, it would be very hard to implement. To achieve this target, the officials could impose a levy on unhealthy foods, or reduce their availability on the market. In Italy, for example, products such as carbonated sugary drinks and chips are heavily taxed. As a result, the sales of these items have decreased. However, if the authorities start to take control of what their citizens can or cannot eat, it may be deemed as curtailing customers’ freedom.

Personal freedom is seen as an extremely important human right. Therefore, many people think that only they should decide what food and drink they consume, and that it is wrong for governments to interfere with their personal choices. Doing so can indeed lead to public discontent. Alternatively, a better approach would be to launch awareness-raising campaigns about a healthy diet so that people would be able to make better-informed dietary decisions themselves.

All in all, authorities can exercise power to limit the selection of foods people have access to, but that would not be without consequences. Instead, governments should invest in education programs to educate people how they can improve their health simply through making wiser decisions about what they eat.

Total words: 292

Band: 7.5+

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​ Writing Task 1, 2 Topics in Uzbekistan — 17.07.2021

TASK 1: Map (below)

TASK 2: In some countries it is illegal for employers to reject someone's applying for a job because of his or her age. Do you think it is a negative or positive development? Explain the reasons and give relevant example from your experience.

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Bar Graph

Q: A survey conducted for the places in which people gain access to the internet from 1998 to 2004

Answer:

The bar graph compares the percentage of survey of 4 places where people used internet between 1998 and 2004.

Overall,it can be seen that the proportion of Internet users declined at work and college.In addition,home was always the best place to access Internet throughout the period.

The rate of internet users grew at home and library.In 1998, roughly 52% of people gained access to the internet at home,while the figure for library was around five times lower.The percentage of people who used internet at home had lost their previous dominance by 2004,when the figure rose slightly to 55%.Regarding library,the number of users reached by 5% in 2000,before remaining the same the last 3 years,at 12%.

Interestingly,from 1998to2002 saw no changes in the level of internet users at college to represent exactly 20%.Likewise,access to the internet at work also stood unchanged in the first three years ,at just 30%.Finally,in 2004,the least people chose to access to the internet here(10%)

Total words: 178

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2021-07-16 19:00:23 #OfficialPreparation #Writing9

IELTS Writing Task 2: ADVANTAGES / DISADVANTAGES ESSAY with Jay!

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2021-07-15 18:00:18 ​​​​​​#Essay109 #Writing #Task2

Advantage / Disadvantage

Q: What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in a large city?

Answer:

Nowadays, the populations of most countries have grown, and many people live in large cities. However for some people, choosing to live in a large city could be a hard decision, as that has its advantages as well as its disadvantages. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument.

On the one hand, there are certain advantages to live in a large city. First of all, living in in a large metropolis is highly convenient. Amenities and facilities such as shops, clinics, schools, pharmacies and entertainment venues are likely to be within a reasonable distance. One would not have to go far to get to those places. Secondly, large cities also provide their residents with a wide range of educational and job opportunities. Schools are of higher quality, and the standard of education is often better in large cities. Moreover, employees can receive a higher salary and have better jobs there.

Turning to the other side of the argument, living in large cities also has its downsides. With so many people living in such large cities, traffic is often very slow. During the rush hour, one could be stuck in traffic jams for hours and hours, moving an inch per minute. Furthermore, all those exhaust fumes from the hundreds of vehicles and emissions from factories make the air quite polluted, causing smog. Thus, living in a large polluted city with heavy traffic and the multitude of cars honking all day can never be peaceful and will definitely have deleterious effects on people’s health in the long run.

In summary, living in a large city can be extremely convenient. It also provides people with better education and more job opportunities. However, living in such cities could also be quite stressful, with all the noise and traffic jams resulting in unhealthy noise and air pollution.

Total words: 306

Band: 7.5+

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2021-07-13 15:12:42 ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​#Writing #Task1

Table

Q:The table below gives information about the average annual spending of university students in three different countries.

Answer:

The given table compares the percentage of expenditure which college students from 3 countries spend on different living expenses each year.

Overall, the total spending of students in country A was higher than the expenditure of students in countries B and C. In all the countries, students spent the highest proportion of their budget on accommodation and food.

In country A, the total spending of students is highest, at 5000$ per year, compared with $4500 and $1500 for students in countries B and C respectively.

Accommodation accounts for 45% of the total expenditure of students in country A, while the proportions were lower for students in country B at 35%, and country C, at only 30%. However, in term of food, students in country C spend the largest percentage of their money on it, accounting for 36%. The figures for country A and B are only 22% and 28% respectively. Students in country C also spent a high percentage of their budget
on books, at 21%, compared with 9% for students in country B and just 3% for students in country A. By contrast, students in countries A and B spent 22% and 23% respectively of their budget on leisure, while students in country C spent only 12% of their total money on this category.

Total words: 196

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