IELTS Essays Band 9 | IELTS Writing 9.0

2024-01-29 16:21:07 ​​ Structure of the #Essay283

You were given an opinion essay which means you had to pick a side. So,

· Do you agree that it is important for cities and towns to invest heavily in building large outdoor public spaces? (or)

· Do you disagree that it is important for cities and towns to invest heavily in building large outdoor public spaces?

Once you pick a side, you can start planning your essay and then writing it. Don’t forget to state your opinion on it.

Question Paraphrased - As we are progressing towards development and well-built infrastructure, many people claim that it is essential for cities to invest substantially in the creation of large outdoor public spaces.

Opinion - In my opinion, it is true that the authorities should invest in building huge outdoor spaces for the public, as it will promote tourism and public health.
A thesis statement - In the forthcoming paragraph, I shall explain my point of view in detail.

Body Paragraph 1:
Central idea: Benefits of public outdoor areas
Supporting points:
· Important, not only for aesthetic reasons
· Provides opportunities to engage with other people
· Improves quality of life

Body Paragraph 2:
Central idea: Ways outdoor spaces promotes tourism
Supporting points:
· Enhances area’s natural beauty
· Boosts tourism
· Promotes economic development

Conclusion:
Reiterated that investing in outdoor spaces improves the look of a city and helps to promote tourism and supported the side taken in introduction.

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2024-01-26 16:18:02 ​​#Essay283 #Writing #Task2

Agree/Disagree

Q: Some believe it is important for cities and towns to invest heavily in building large
outdoor public spaces. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Answer:

As we are progressing towards development and well-built infrastructure, many people claim that it is essential for cities to invest substantially in the creation of large outdoor public spaces. In my opinion, it is true that the authorities should invest in building huge outdoor spaces for the public, as it will promote tourism and public health. In the forthcoming paragraph, I shall explain my point of view in detail.

Primarily, as we are moving towards development, the demand for outdoor public space is also doubling. Outdoor public places are important for more than just aesthetic reasons. It provides a communal area for people to connect with nature and other people. It also allows youngsters to participate in a variety of outdoor activities, such as the famous Lodhi Garden of Delhi. This park helps appreciate the beauty of the town while also providing opportunities for people from various areas to come and spend leisure time and improve their general health.

Besides that, outdoor spaces also help to boost tourism. It attracts visitors from all over the world to view and enjoy the area's natural beauty. New York City's Central Park is a classic example. The city was well-known for business visits prior to its development. The construction of Central Park not only allowed locals to participate in a variety of activities but also attracted non-business visitors from all over the world.

However, some people think that spending too much money on outdoor spaces is a complete waste of money. But it is also equally true that we cannot overlook the reality of the growing demand for fresh air and greenery.

In conclusion, investing in outdoor spaces improves the look of a city and helps to promote tourism. Authorities should allocate a well-balanced budget based on the needs of the city's growth.

Total words: 300

Band: 7.0+

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2024-01-19 18:00:31 ​​ Structure of the #Essay282

You were given an opinion essay which means you had to pick a side. So,

· Do you agree that it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing?
(or)
· Do you disagree that it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing?
Once you pick a side, you can start planning your essay and then writing it.
Don’t forget to state your opinion on it.

Question Paraphrased - The issue of utilization of the open areas for planting or building more houses has grown to become a debatable issue.

Opinion - In my opinion, I agree that trees and gardens play a vital role in human development.
A thesis statement - In the forthcoming paragraph, I shall explain my point of view and give supporting reasons.

Body Paragraph 1:
Central idea: Benefits of planting trees over building houses

Supporting points:
· Promotes aesthetics of the city
· Provides opportunities to engage with other people
· Improves quality of life and give more relaxing environment

Body Paragraph 2:
Central idea: Benefits of planting trees over building houses

Supporting points:
· Improves air and noise quality
· Absorbers carbon dioxide and dust

Conclusion:
Reiterated that due to mass urbanization, the need for trees and gardens has drastically increased and supported the side taken in introduction.

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2024-01-17 16:12:08 ​​#Essay282 #Writing #Task2

Agree/Disagree

Q: Some believe it is important for cities and towns to invest heavily in building large outdoor public spaces. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Answer:

As we are progressing towards development and well-built infrastructure, many people claim that it is essential for cities to invest substantially in the creation of large outdoor public spaces. In my opinion, it is true that the authorities should invest in building huge outdoor spaces for the public, as it will promote tourism and public health. In the forthcoming paragraph, I shall explain my point of view in detail.

Primarily, as we are moving towards development, the demand for outdoor public space is also doubling. Outdoor public places are important for more than just aesthetic reasons. It provides a communal area for people to connect with nature and other people. It also allows youngsters to participate in a variety of outdoor activities, such as the famous Lodhi Garden of Delhi. This park helps appreciate the beauty of the town while also providing opportunities for people from various areas to come and spend leisure time and improve their general health.

Besides that, outdoor spaces also help to boost tourism. It attracts visitors from all over the world to view and enjoy the area's natural beauty. New York City's Central Park is a classic example. The city was well-known for business visits prior to its development. The construction of Central Park not only allowed locals to participate in a variety of activities but also attracted non-business visitors from all over the world.

However, some people think that spending too much money on outdoor spaces is a complete waste of money. But it is also equally true that we cannot overlook the reality of the growing demand for fresh air and greenery.

In conclusion, investing in outdoor spaces improves the look of a city and helps to promote tourism. Authorities should allocate a well-balanced budget based on the needs of the city's growth.

Total words: 300

Band: 7.5+

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2024-01-15 18:10:16 IELTS Writing Task 1

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2024-01-11 16:37:26 ​​ IELTS Writing Task 1 Tip

In written reports we don't normally describe statistics using exact numbers as this can be very boring and distracting for the reader. Instead we use approximation to round numbers up or down.

Elicit different ways of describing the following numbers:

134,575: just over 135,000, approximately/roughly/around/about 135,000;
134,575 compared to 396,530: over triple, around 200% more, about three times as many, roughly 260,000 more, about a third as many, approximately one in three, far more, for less.

Writing Task 1 Essay Sample

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Model answer

The graph shows how the populations of India and China have changed since 2000 and how they will change in the future.
In 2000, there were more people living in China than in India. The number of Chinese was 1.25 billion, while India's population was about 1 billion. Between 2000 and 2010, there has been a 0.2 billion rise in the number of Indian citizens. Over the same period, China's population has increased by 0.1 billion to reach over 1.35 billion.

According to the graph, the population in India will increase more quickly than in China, and experts say that by 2030, both countries will have the same population of 1.45 billion. After this, China's population is likely to fall slightly to 1.4 billion in 2050, while India's population will probably increase and reach 1.6 billion.

Thus, over the 50-year period, India is going to experience steady growth in its population and it will overtake China. On the other hand, China's population will peak in 2030 and then begin to fall.

Total words: 173

Band: 6.5+

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2024-01-09 15:10:06 ​​ The man who moved a mountain

There are people who say love can move mountains. This might not be physically possible, but Dashrath Manjhi, also known as the ‘Mountain Man’, came quite close. In one day of his life, his wife fell while crossing a nearby hill and hurt herself seriously. She needed quick medical assistance, but that wasn’t possible due to the hill that isolated their small village from the next town.

Tragically enough, his wife died from the serious injuries before Dashrath could do anything about it. It was the night when Dashrath Manjhi decided to carve a small path through the mountain in order to give his village easier access to medical assistance.

It was an ambitious plan and he was heavily ridiculed for it. But after working for 22 years with the greatest determination and willpower, a path was carved into the hill. Even though he was initially mocked and ridiculed for his mission to give his hometown easier access to the nearby town, he finally succeeded. His life’s work helped to reduce the distance between the two towns from 55 km to only 15 km, so that never again such a thing would happen.

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2024-01-05 18:08:48 ​​ Hi guys

Just a few quick tips for your writing.

1. Try to avoid using 'some' unnecessarily. This is a word we use all the time in speaking but only in cases when you need to explain that you don't mean 'all' in formal writing. In other words, it's ok to write 'some people believe' (as in not all), but not ok to say 'some friends' ('some' does not affect meaning significantly).

2. Make sure you don't overuse capitals. I often see people use capitals to refer to subjects in school like history and science. We use capitals for the names of departments in a real university etc, but not for just describing school subjects generally. Also, don't write new sentences with "However, People think..." (no capital on people).

3. Don't put a comma before 'that'. Sometimes we put commas before 'which' in non-defining relatives clauses, but it's almost always a mistake when I see ', that'.

4. Don't always explore both sides of the issue if you can't think of much good stuff for both sides. If you feel strongly about one side and you have good supporting reasons, a strong opinion (one-sided) essay is best. This only applies to questions that don't require you to look at both sides (so not 'discuss both views' or 'outweigh' essays).

5. Make sure your ideas are well developed. Always have a minimum of two sentences for every idea in a body paragraph. We have to extend on our ideas to get a decent TA and CC score.

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